Some people suggest that it is better for children to be brought up by the whole family including uncles, aunts, and grandparents, rather than just the parents. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and examples.
With the advancement of time the family’s size has decreased. Strata of the populace reiterate that kids should be nurtured in the big families comprised of grandparents, uncles, and aunties along with parents. This essay is in agreement with the above-mentioned notion.
To begin with, firstly, when a child is brought up a small or nuclear family, he/she is most prone to loneliness because nowadays, both parents use to work and not have enough time to spend with a child. However, nurturing in large family means, they are never alone and can easily learn about the importance of each and every relationship in life. In such families, if parents are on work they need not worry about the meal of the child as they are aware of the fact that other family members are there to feed them. In other words, the child learns all the etiquettes even without parents, and parents can work without any tension.
Furthermore, the big family means lots of relationships to handle which teaches kids to be tolerant towards others and side by the side of the family member. To describe, they learn how to balance practical life and emotions without hurting other's feelings. They also become more enthusiastic at work when they get more attention and affection from home. For instance, a survey done by “The Time” reveals that around 67 percent of kids feel more active when they get care from many people around them.
To conclude, bringing up children in big families has more positive effects on their lives as they are instilled with various characteristics such as tolerance, respect, and activeness. Furthermore, they are never left alone which is an obvious drawback of small families.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 145, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...neliness because nowadays, both parents use to work and not have enough time to spe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, still, thus, as to, for instance, such as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97183098592 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63832743841 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588028169014 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.056580082 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.615384615 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122317554746 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468025183014 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339173160056 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0805820103817 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273079740438 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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