Question
Some high school required all students to wear uniform, other higher school permit students to decide what to wear to school.
Which of these two school policies you think is better
Question
Some high school required all students to wear uniform, other higher school permit students to decide what to wear to school.
Which of these two school policies you think is better
Solution
Wearing of school uniform by secondary schools students is not maintained by all schools, While some schools required students to put on uniform, other higher school allow students to wear whatever they decide upon. In my opinion, I believe schools should set a standard, and make students wear uniform, as this will not only provide a means of identification, but also help prevent distractions during learning.
One reason why secondary schools should make students wear uniform to school is it provide a good means of identification, but for school uniform, many students would be mistaken for idle teenagers on the street. One can easily differentiate a school student from others because of the uniqueness of their wears whereas, if they are allowed to dress freely to school , it will be a hard task knowing a student from non student. For example, a teenager in my locality would have been unjustly accused of a crime exonerating him would have been very difficult. when he explained he has been in school all day , his appearance attested to that fact. The importance of wearing uniform by this group of students cannot be over emphasized.
Another important reason why wearing of school uniform should be encouraged among our teenagers in high school that it help minimize distraction. Students at this stage are very prone to distractions and negative influence , although parental guidance is necessary , but setting a standard help put them in check. Most students who go to these schools in free wears want to be at their best even when its beyond their reach . In a bid to impress their peers they go the extra mile of seeking funds by involving in immoral act, and even associating with the wrong set of people. Since teenagers are highly influenced, their sole aim of going to school can be forgotten and their focus disturbed. I think choosing a code of dressing for high school students will help achieve the primary aim of learning.
To conclude, despite the fact that some higher institutions allow students to wear whatever they decide upon to school, it is my opinion that a standard should be set whereby students will wear uniforms to school. This will provide a means of identification, and also help minimize distraction associated with this unique age group.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, whereas, while, for example, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2088.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 415.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0313253012 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70209878955 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486746987952 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 621.9 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.8828300574 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.5 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9375 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.629157136654 0.244688304435 257% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.242787787962 0.084324248473 288% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.241557840165 0.0667982634062 362% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.462694891947 0.151304729494 306% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.187696476603 0.056905535591 330% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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