Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter
• Describe the problem
• Say how long it has been a problem
• Explain what action you want the neighbour to take
Dear Nimisha,
Thank you so far for being a supportive neighbour always. Recently it has been observed that you keep your dustbin outside the main door since we have common entrance it isn't comforting.
Dustbin at the doors looks untidy as well as sometimes stink, which is depressing when I come home from long hours of work. It is very unhealthy and can lead to inviting malarial fly's, which can prove fatal for both of us. Last weekend when my friends came to my place, they seem to be upset about the smell since we kept the doors open for other guests eventually we had to close it later.
Since we have the same layout, I request you to keep the bin the balcony next to the bathroom at the backyard; this is where I prefer keeping, it can be no problem for anyone.
I hope you understand the situation and take adequate action on the same.
Yours faithfully,
Shreyas Parab
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 171, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...n door since we have common entrance it isnt comforting. Dustbin at the doors look...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 727.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51552795031 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28881776886 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.695652173913 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.0841621384 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.875 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133713259729 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063204603379 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456688731634 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0846325412135 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522823174945 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.