Many students take part-time jobs while studying in the universities. Is this a bad or a good idea?
Can by doing a part-time job along with studies would create hindrance in a person’s education? As a matter of fact, more often than not it is observed by many a man that the trend of working while studying has taken a boom in the modern era. To my mind, it is a welcome change because it not only makes an individual self-dependent but also, builds an overall character to tackle ups and downs in the future.
Arguably, difficulties faced by an individual at an early age are not considered to be the stepping stone for a progressive lifestyle for no reason. Since in myriad of teenagers believe in leaving their parent's house when they turn eighteen, the way they save for their tuition and basic necessities gives them the lesson for survival in the world. A painstaking research by Harvard University has had been undertaken on the teenagers, where it was revealed that 57% of the students who preferred a job along-with their studies became the leading businessmen in the future, rather than those who lived with their parents during their course of study.
Notwithstanding the brighter side, another school of thought argues that doing part-time affects the education of an individual. Owing to limited hours in a day it is difficult to manage work and studies, the individual often feels sleep deprived due to this which leads to health problems. Although it is not entirely untrue, the real impact is not that severe as it is assumed. For instance, no sooner did a survey was conducted by the Canadian Education department, than it was unfolded that 23% of the students who were working a part-time job along with their studies suffered from permanent nerve damage, due to getting less than 5 hours sleep in a day.
To conclude, but for any doubt, working during study makes an individual financially stable. However, if a balance between work and studies are made for a healthy lifestyle, it would lead to a socially stable and professionally enriching lives; lest good outcomes should be far out of reach.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 283, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...the way they save for their tuition and basic necessities gives them the lesson for survival in t...
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Line 5, column 350, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'painstaking research'.
Suggestion: Painstaking research
...m the lesson for survival in the world. A painstaking research by Harvard University has had been unde...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while, for instance, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1689.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88150289017 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75609973264 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589595375723 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.5813214431 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.75 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8333333333 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180075354159 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612032815258 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574241495269 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104716829038 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435354536143 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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