Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.
Views may vary when it comes to the issue of whether youths are responsible for their communities nowadays or not. Although some people think that the younger generation is always diligent in their jobs, they are active in helping and caring for society. I personally believe so because of three rationales, which I can elaborate upon hereunder.
To begin with, a lot of youngsters are involved actively in organizing campaigns around certain social issues. The loud voice of these people can cause a drastic change in the world which is most probably beneficial to the entire population. For instance, most recently the murder of a black man in the hands of police is a nationwide rebuke with the participation of sen percent youngsters. George Floyd, who was arrested by the Minnesota police crew was pinned beneath a police official leads to his miserable death. Social issues like racism are not tolerated by people in the USA which causes campaigns and protests against the police department. Culminatevely, the government fired all four policemen who involved in the crime and charge first-grade murder. If the raised voice of the young people was not there, this case will also be considered as one among many deaths relating to racial discrimination. This example clearly illustrates the helping mentality and the social commitment of youth towards society.
Next, nowadays, youngsters serve as volunteers in social organizations like the Red Cross in spite of their job. Moreover, these people are finding time to work as volunteers with no benefits in return. The youth thinks that activities like caring for homeless, sick, or elderly are considered as their duties. To prove this I have two examples in my personal life. First of all, my home town was hit by a cyclone in 2018, which causes devastating effects in my town. I still remember, a group of young volunteers endorsed us by helping in arranging homes and clean the surroundings. Our villagers wholeheartedly thank their valuable efforts to reform our town from the perilous cyclone. This inspired me to join the Red Cross to serve needy people. I got a chance to work as a volunteer in South Africa for treating sick and elders for 3 weeks. It was an unforgettable experience in my life as a youngster. These 2 instances precisely reveal how dedicated youngsters now to their communities.
Finally, the views of parents are also changed to raise their children. In addition, they are teaching their children to be social beings. However, this mentality can transform the future generation's attributes towards the community.
All in all, with all the reasons into account, I vehemently assure that youth are spending enough and more time to help society. Not only do youngsters pay attention to social and political issues through strikes and campaigns but also they serve as volunteers in social organizations to help others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, for instance, in addition, first of all, in spite of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2435.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 477.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10482180294 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84242096058 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 268.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561844863732 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 757.8 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6085160036 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.1851851852 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92592592593 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204610763073 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448546257708 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453936886471 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109538382695 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420708755633 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 86.8835125448 146% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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