Many people use distance-learning programs to study at home , but some people think that it cannot bring the benefit as much as attending college or university. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In today's world, every person is highly educated irrespective of gender, people do not
depend on others for their livelihood as majority of workforce are earning
population. there are two types of education which includes direct education or distance education programs. this essay will discuss why attending college or university is preferred than distance
education programs. While there are several issues that students face through
distance learning programs the most important thing is the lack of knowledge.
studying at home will not offer any interaction
with fellow students and teachers which limits the knowledge level to books and
in these days practical knowledge are more important than theoretical
knowledge. For example, Research reveals that academic performance of students
studying through distance education is comparatively less. Secondly studying in
college not only helps an individual to excel in academics but also it improves
intellectual skills, problem solving skills, analytical skills and
communication skills. In the competitive world, students with high skill set
grab the job opportunities and excel in work performance. For example, survey
indicates that 60% of employees with high skill sets outshine in work
performance than others. In conclusion, this essay described how attending
universities offer advanced knowledge
and skills to people than studying
through distance education. In my opinion, studying in college will offer
better future for students.
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- Over population in major urban centers around the world is a major issue What are the problems of this What can be done to solve the issue 55
- Many people use distance learning programs to study at home but some people think that it cannot bring the benefit as much as attending college or university To what extent do you agree or disagree 79
- Many people use distance learning programs to study at home but some people think that it cannot bring the benefit as much as attending college or university To what extent do you agree or disagree 85
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 5.75862068966 295% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1311.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 220.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.95909090909 5.00649968141 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8690821235 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609090909091 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2994985921 50.4703680194 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.181818182 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36363636364 7.25397266985 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.12807881773 484% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161793193658 0.242375264174 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629711798945 0.0925447433944 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473126652017 0.071462118173 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0480420710731 0.151781067708 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566564561877 0.0609392437508 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 12.6369458128 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 53.1260098522 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.9458128079 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.29 11.5310837438 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 79.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.5 Out of 90
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