Modern lifestyles make hard for people to lead active and healthy lives. Why is this the case? What governments and large companies should do to help people to exercise?
Nowadays, it is hard for people to have a healthy lifestyle. Some people, especially youngters, think that it is not necessary to have that way of life. And I will discuss, in the below essay, why we find it not easy to lead that lives.
First, it comes to our notice that more and more skyscrapers are being built everyday, from fields to the rural areas where nobody lives. All of those buildings are replacing our places where we can exercise, jog, or do fitness. Secondly, besides lacking of places, we all were swept into the maelstrom of working, from dawn till dusk. It is common that the only spare time we have is when after leaving the office, and at that time of the day, going home or taking rest is the preferable choice than working out. For instance, Japan is one of the most hard-working countries in the world. Japanese always work extra time voluntarily, so it is 7PM when they leave the office, not 5:30 PM like in other countries.
Living for the present, we forget to live for the future. Health is the most crucial thing that we need to protect. So, besides our own efforts, governments and big companies need to do something to cope with this problem. Some companies have extra exercises such as a cha-cha-cha dance or flash mob dance which last only about 15 minutes between the working hours. It not only reduces stress but bonds the relationship between the workers as well. And the government should reduce the fee of the gym or some other facilities in order for all residents who can not afford it can use them and exercise regularly.
To conclude, health is so important that we need to maintain it by working out. But, it is not only an individual’s efforts, but also the company's and the government’s responsibilities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64743589744 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61642136314 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.834855074 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2941176471 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3529411765 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.70588235294 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165492121181 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530604694968 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679093210227 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0991183288709 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597994501899 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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