You have recently taken a two-day course. Write to give your feedback to the course organiser.
In your letter, you should tell:
· the details of the course
· what you liked or disliked about it
· suggest some improvements to the course.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to give feedback about the two-day course that I attended which was organized by your company.
The course major was related to the improvement of public speaking skills. It was held in two batches with first being on the mornings and second in the evenings. As I am a full-time worker I attended the second batch.
I can surely say that I found the information taught extremely useful to me. In particular, the focus of the lector on such minor details like eye contact and tone of voice impressed me with a significant in-depth explanation. Furthermore, the course also covered the skills of making presentation slides. The comprehensive approach of the tutor on different aspects of interaction with the public made me completely contented with the lectures.
Finally, I would like to make a suggestion from my experience, that I think might be helpful. Mainly, it is related to the incorporation of some practice tasks to the course plan. Even though lectures are informative and sophisticated, I think without the practice of the learned subjects it can be hard to assimilate the new skills.
I hope my feedback will be of some assistance to you.
Yours faithfully,
Rakhman Kurbanov.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 163, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...he mornings and second in the evenings. As I am a full-time worker I attended the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, furthermore, if, second, so, i think, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1024.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97087378641 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9789375936 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616504854369 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4530986662 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.7692307692 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8461538462 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 4.34317383033 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25134441117 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790854151378 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0821774705549 0.0603063233224 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141763082754 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0930190543398 0.0580467560999 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.