Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible.
Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. Be sure to use your own words. Do not use memorized examples.
Every young adult shapes his/her life differently. It is always difficult to determine when a young adult becomes physically and mentally mature enough to live independently from his parents. While some young adults decide to abandon their parents' house, others prefer to continue living with the family for a longer period. I believe that young adults can benefit in many ways by living with their families.
First, parental guidance and assistance are important factors that contribute to a young adult's life. For example, it is better to discuss problems and difficulties arisen with parents, who have extensive experience in their lives. They can lead or illuminate a child to more appropriate solutions or decisions. The obedience to parents' guidance would provide rather favourable consequences than harmful. Moreover, parents would prevent an adult from committing possibly dangerous acts such as addiction to drugs or alcohol.
Second, young individuals would have a relatively "burden-free" life, if they are to live with parents. This is mainly because the domestic chores such as cooking, shopping, paying utilities and overall house maintenance are usually distributed among family members. Such duties seriously distract and overwhelm a young person who is willing to concentrate on studies. As a result, they will cause poor academic performance.
Third, while living with parents, a young adult can still possess and even develop independent thinking and personality. It is mainly a matter of how parents trust him and respect his decisions. For example, in my case, my parents always try not to interfere with my independence, on the contrary, they encourage and induce me to devise my resolution to a problem.
To sum up, I think that young individuals should live with their parents for a longer period since it will help the former to be under "fair" guidance and concentrate on studies together with personality. In my opinion, a clear distinction between maturity and independence should be set.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 90, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'adults'' or 'adult's'?
Suggestion: adults'; adult's
...tant factors that contribute to a young adults life. For example, it is better to disc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, so, still, third, while, for example, i think, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the contrary, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1733.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 318.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44968553459 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06423104325 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591194968553 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6659456524 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2777777778 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.45110844103 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358301580516 0.236089414692 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109765884548 0.076458572812 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0980605039115 0.0737576698707 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197854154071 0.150856017488 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111491737604 0.0645574589148 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 10.9000537634 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.