Topic : genius in nothing more then a another therm of obsession.
To illustrate and analyse deeply about two terms " genius" and "obsession", it would be many distinct way to support or oppose the claim represented by the author. Genius in the complete positive term. it can be defined as the intellectual ability and problem solving capacity of a person. it is the objective and not related to any subject in which any individual is genius. while the obsession , we can define as may positive and negative synonyms like : persistence to achieve something , relentless to go in depth to enhance the knowledge. however, it can be the addiction of you are running after the wrong thing and want to achieve something that damage your career or future.however, we can consider that ,there might be a psychological relation between the both.
firstly,if we take as example of famous scientist Albert Einstein, as we know the history that , he have put numerous efforts to achieve the success in the theory of light. if he would not obsess and thirsty to get to know about the basis behind this, we might not be a scientist.hence we can consider the genius as the another term of obsession considering this example.
Moreover, Obsession may be for the harmful of it is for the wrong thing. for example the obsession to become a police is lead a person to build a bright and respectful life in the society, while the obsession to take a revenge from someone who harm him earlier or ruin his life, this definitely spoil the future and bring him close to the nadir situation of the life .
on the other hand, it is not compulsory that all genius person are obsessive. is it necessary to be mad to become a genius? no. there might be a change that a person is intelligent enough to fulfill there goal and achieve with any persistence trials and efforts.hence we cannot surly connect the two terms and use it a supplant of each other.
in conclusion, looking to the perspective presented above, we can co-relate genius and obsession.it can be true to some extend. genius is intelligence level of a person,while obsession can be consider in place of the term genius if the subject is productive and lead towards to progress.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1792.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 374.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79144385027 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96971999478 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516042780749 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.3361289782 60.3974514979 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.466666667 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9333333333 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 5.21951772744 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 7.80617977528 372% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138306474666 0.243740707755 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582227462851 0.0831039109588 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458349459662 0.0758088955206 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.084178465626 0.150359130593 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0209951512273 0.0667264976115 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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