Write a letter to your local council about the improvement of tourist facilities in your area. Include the following in your letter:
- What are the current tourist facilities in your area?
- What are the benefits tourism brings to local community?
- Suggest improvements that need to be done, in your opinion
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am wiring to suggest you some recommendation with regard to our region tourism industry. As you know, tourism is considered as a high potential for promoting economy.
To begin, it souled be mentioned that currently there are some tourist attraction in our area. The clean coastline and those beach-restaurants and clubs are able to create some pure joy for people. Also, there are some hotels, however they are not five stars but offer some high-quality services.
Needless to say, tourism is considered as a successful way for making money and most of the countries around the world are investing in this field. One among several accomplishments because of a well-developed tourism industry is the more job opportunities for local people which cause the reduction of financial problems. Local shops, small business and regional markets would be active and many of local labors who have to immigrate to other cities or even other countries will find jobs in their hometown.
In my opinion, the best way to develop our tourism industry is to construct some high-level hotels with many attractive option such as outdoor and indoor pools, cinema, private beach, equipped gym and UALL services. Also, it is a helpful idea to publish some adverts on corresponding magazines and websites.
I hope my suggestion would be of an assistance.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours Faithfully,
Yalda Asgari.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/ Madam, I am wiring to suggest you some recommen...
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Line 13, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...your consideration. Yours Faithfully, Yalda Asgari.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, well, such as, you know, in my opinion, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1211.0 937.175257732 129% => OK
No of words: 231.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24242424242 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96049462099 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 127.690721649 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662337662338 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 290.88556701 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.342505359 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1538461538 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7692307692 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120863925688 0.216113520407 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490597050271 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526327489419 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0566234849939 0.12726935374 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408873284039 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 8.71597938144 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 41.2886597938 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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