It is neither possible nor useful to provide university places for a high proportion of young people. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
It has been suggested that offering university education to all young learners is impossible and useless . Given that it is unlikely to give all young learners access to postgraduate study program,I believe that continuos learning is conductive to success in life.
Not all learners have chance to go to university due to their financial capacity and career desires .Beside providing formal qualifications , the universities fail to reach those whose parents are unable to support their learnings because of the increase in tuition of either private institutions or public ones. The exobitant cost of studying comes at the expense of the number of students applied for tertiary education. Furthermore, some people do not want to commit years of their lives to a college education since they express a strong preference for practical knowledge than theoretical one which might not help them accumalate experiential knowledge.
Nevertheless , we can never deny the usefulness of university education. First, university degree acts as an incentive for students to be confident in job application after graduation. By gaining practical experience in a job through an internship , new graduates might be given an oppotunity to become official members even if they have little or no experience in that area so that they can add it to their curriculum vitae and be confident to apply to the preferred corporations. Second,university can benefit students who aim to pursue post graduate education. Bachelor degree is a mini entry requirement for any post graduate study,especially students with passion for medical, academic or scientific research.
In conclusion, although it is useful for students who adore researching to enrol in post graduate study and have better employment oppotunities, educational officials are not likely to fullfil a vast majority of young learners attending universities as they can not afford the increasing studying fees.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, nevertheless, second, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53511705686 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20027542411 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61872909699 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.733792607 49.4020404114 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.454545455 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1818181818 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137150654529 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567373824631 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0270806920353 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0832745579617 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0127625021751 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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