A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper.
Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter:
explain what you are currently doing
describe your suitability for this area of work
say when you can attend an interview
Dear sir,
I am writing to express my interest in your job vacancies of waiters and waitresses. I have read your advertisement regarding recruitment of waiters in the yesterday’s local newspaper. I pursued my bachelor degree in hotel management before two years and now I am working as a waiter in “The Grand Bhagwati” restaurant situated in my hometown.
Secondly, I have experience in all types of work in the area of waiter’s job. I did all work starting from collecting menu from customers, cleaning tables and handover bills at the end. Thus, I can assure that I expertise in all area of work.
Lastly, I am highly interested in vacancies of waiter in your hotel. So, could you please let me know for any initial formalities like form filing or to apply online? Also, I am ready for face to face interview regarding your job requirements. Furthermore, I am free on next Wednesday as I have full day leave on that day. Thus, I am ready to give my interview on that day.
I am looking forward to your positive response.
Yours faithfully,
Jitendra Bhadja
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir, I am writing to express my interest in y...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ers in the yesterday’s local newspaper. I pursued my bachelor degree in hotel man...
^
Line 11, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...positive response. Yours faithfully, Jitendra Bhadja
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, lastly, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.48453608247 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 899.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83333333333 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96097971212 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618279569892 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7033214619 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.1538461538 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3076923077 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 4.34317383033 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25370161495 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907493031255 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557014604935 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132123309916 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440813260902 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir, I am writing to express my interest in y...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ers in the yesterday’s local newspaper. I pursued my bachelor degree in hotel man...
^
Line 11, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...positive response. Yours faithfully, Jitendra Bhadja
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, lastly, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.48453608247 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 899.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83333333333 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96097971212 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618279569892 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7033214619 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.1538461538 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3076923077 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 4.34317383033 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25370161495 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907493031255 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557014604935 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132123309916 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440813260902 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.