The most effective way to solve traffic and transport problems in the cities is to encourage people from suburbs or the countryside to live in the cities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that people from suburbs or countryside should be persuaded to move into the cities as a solution to the traffic and transportation woe. This essay disagrees with the above statement and will, therefore, explain how it deteriorates the present situation. Firstly, urbanization brings a lot more traffic problems to the cities and secondly, it’s very expensive to live in urban areas.
Urbanization means there will be more vehicles in the cities as people from different age groups will need them to move around together. Also, in order to complete their day to day tasks and responsibilities, the new residents will require more transportation services. This will increase traffic congestion, particularly during peak hours. In New York, for instance, 40% of people use personal vehicles to travel, which is more than one million automobiles on the roads. People settling from rural areas into New York looking for opportunities made this happen and it has resulted in daily traffic jams.
Living in a city, compared to the suburbs, is very expensive. Housing is not cheap in the cities and the cost of rent is skyrocketing. Not only the accommodations but also the food and other services such as bus passes cost a lot more than in rural areas. People may not have enough funds necessary to afford these burdens added along to the cost of moving. Toronto is a prime example where it costs an average person’s monthly salary to rent a one-bedroom apartment.
In conclusion, encouraging public to move into cities would not help in solving traffic and transportation problems because of the fact that more people cause more traffic and the high living cost making it an unaffordable option to many.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 117, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
...ing traffic and transportation problems because of the fact that more people cause more traffic and the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06338028169 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89222359954 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577464788732 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5756011652 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.714285714 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251121997415 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819240732816 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837222027851 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169741364356 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0901109778233 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.