Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People should take time to relax with hobbies or physical activities that are very different from what they do at work.
No one in the world like to engage in their work always. They want a hiatus from the work pressure and need free time to do something they would love to do. By doing the same enervating work in the leisure time will only cause mental retarders. So in my opinion, I concur the statement that people should spent time in their hobbies if possible for their own sake which I describe in the subsequent paragraphs.
Any fun activities or hobbies can create the healthy mental situation in person. Engaging in hectic work schedule may wear the person mental fitness and doing enjoyable tasks might help them to rejuvenate their energy. In fact, they will divert their work tension for some moment. As a result, the person might get charged and fresh enough to take their work efficiently. On the other hand, mental rest and relief is very much important to live the healthy life; otherwise, people can severely affected by the work pressure that leads negatively impacts in their life. Since quality time can bring healthy mental state, activities according to the person preference will provide them salubrious environment to thrive.
Having interest other than regular task will bring the additive skills in person. People might interested in singing, dancing, singing, artistic works, so on; it not only enjoyable to do but also harness good quality within person. For example, people who like to play football make them well-fit both physically and mentally, while doing artistic work like painting may create their other professional field. All in all, doing something extra will take out person from the pool of the work and introduce the entertaining world.
We all want to do something we love in our free time. It is important to make ourselves prepare healthy, energetic and wise in other field as well. That’s why being involved in the passionate activities will help us to be happy and satisfied at the same time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 50, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
... the world like to engage in their work always. They want a hiatus from the work press...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, well, while, for example, in fact, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 325.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92615384615 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44649247777 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1893080799 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1764705882 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1176470588 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11764705882 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245920035329 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806683718739 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562812783418 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156888455241 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609849215888 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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