Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children.To what extent do you agree or disagree
Reading is good for children. Book is very profitable for our life. some individuals believe that reading stroies is better than viewingTV or playing computer games for children.I believe that children are reading stories from books because the book provide knowlage.
First of all, the children can reading the books so they can augment in owr knowlage and they can understand what going on around you.reading is most effective either than watching tv and playing computer games.children's confidence level is increasing if they can read the stories in books.they are augmenting in own imagination power and which helps in future life.
Furthermore,reading stories also devloping in writing skill and speaking skill .they are improving how to pronounciation and vocabulary.reading is to up to memory improvement and also reduse the stress and produce strong analitical thinking skills.childrens are improving in master langauge.
On the other hand,when children watching TV and playing computer games continuesly they can effected in own health and mostly effect in own eyes.children watching TV they create strees in own mind and they are irritate and geting bore.children watching tv and playing computer games they are habited with their.and they will to be lazy.they will augment in deterioration of health and excess.Therefore reading stories from book is better than watching TV or playing computer games.
In conclusion,reading is best option for children not than watching TV and playing computer games. it is more effective way and it is better for health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51028806584 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26818414737 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506172839506 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 159.119402887 49.4020404114 322% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 167.375 106.682146367 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.375 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.375 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.444875289878 0.244688304435 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.227744816254 0.084324248473 270% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137446522227 0.0667982634062 206% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273914664481 0.151304729494 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132958242468 0.056905535591 234% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.27 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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