More and more pollution and wastage produced. How common people are affected by pollution? What can an individual can do to prevent it?
Nowadays, the ecological situation is becoming worse and worse from day to day due to increased pollutant emissions and waste disposition. Obviously, it has a negative impact on regular citizens, whose well-being is tremendously affected by it. In this essay, I will consider the consequences of pollution for people and what can be done for prevention.
First, contamination of air, water, and earth has a direct impact on human health. It is known, that people, who live in industrial areas have health issues associated with it. For instance, in a district where air pollution is above an acceptable level, citizens have such diseases as asthma or lung problems. In addition, the active emission of fumes and disposal of waste has a negative influence on the environment. To illustrate, modern humanity may observe so-called “Dead zones” in the ocean, where life is not possible due to massive contamination of solid domestic waste such as plastic bags and packages.
Everyone can argue that the government should regulate gas emissions and waste disposal sites. However, some actions can be done on an individual level, such as the switch from single-use plastic bags to multiuse eco-friendly cloth bags. As well as this, every person should be aware of their personal contribution to pollution and try as much as possible to reduce it. For example, it would be a great deal to diminish travel by car for the reduction of exhaust fumes emissions. As a result, combined efforts would improve the ecological conditions significantly.
In conclusion, increased pollution is negatively affecting the general public, especially human health. Meanwhile, each individual person may contribute to improving the situation by reducing their personal pollution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38989169675 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00306767526 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595667870036 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.3630432468 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.5333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4666666667 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.93333333333 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155899675134 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481886546066 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538773176678 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0991879562892 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439208129593 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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