You recently met a couple who will be visiting your town. Write a letter to them and say
- Suggest what to bring
- Recommend where they should stay
- What places they should visit
Dear Sara and Amir,
I hope you are doing well. I am writing with regard to your trip to our town. I would like to provide you some information and I hope the following information will be some of the assistance.
To begin with, as I know, you are going to come here in September. I should say that you chose the best time of the year because the weather is great at this time. I strongly recommend you do not bring warm clothes, instead, I suggest to bring some light clothes as the weather is warm. Besides, please do not forget to bring anti-insects spray for nights if you do not want to stay awake all night struggling with insects.
Another point that I would like to draw to your attention is your staying place. Although there are a number of suitable hotels, I recommend you to book a room in a family running hotel which name is green Diamond. It has a great reputation for high-quality service that they offer, especially the quality of the foods.
As you have plenty of time, I advise you to visit some of the best tourist attractions in our city. Some historical sites are on the top of the list. Also, I am sure you will enjoy spending a day in Aqua Park which would be an exciting experience.
Once again, I hope this information may be of use and see you soon.
Please do not hesitate to contact me if you need further information.
Yours sincerely,
Yalda Asgari.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 169, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... hope the following information will be some of the assistance. To begin with, as I know,...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 228, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest bringing'.
Suggestion: suggest bringing
...u do not bring warm clothes, instead, I suggest to bring some light clothes as the weather is wa...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... further information. Yours sincerely, Yalda Asgari.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, may, so, well, to begin with, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1140.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 257.0 206.0 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43579766537 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49190729406 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583657587549 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 355.5 290.88556701 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2449995999 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.25 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0625 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9375 4.34317383033 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223120882395 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631875399503 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327999236299 0.0603063233224 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0946533995806 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390480485024 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 169, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... hope the following information will be some of the assistance. To begin with, as I know,...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 228, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest bringing'.
Suggestion: suggest bringing
...u do not bring warm clothes, instead, I suggest to bring some light clothes as the weather is wa...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... further information. Yours sincerely, Yalda Asgari.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, may, so, well, to begin with, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1140.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 257.0 206.0 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43579766537 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49190729406 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583657587549 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 355.5 290.88556701 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2449995999 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.25 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0625 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9375 4.34317383033 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223120882395 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631875399503 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327999236299 0.0603063233224 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0946533995806 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390480485024 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.