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Ambition is a negative attribute of the person’s character. Do you agree or disagree?
One may asserts that being ambitious is one of the negative character of mankind, but ,to some extend; it is hard to dispute or concur with this claim. Although some of people believe that ambitious is a negative aspect of human’s personality, there are alternative objective evidences that demonstrate that being ambitious is a positive part of people’s character. To the best of my knowledge, ambition can be one of the keys of obstacles.
The remarkable point is that when a person is ambitious he or she has strong desire to achieve the wishes. It is clear-cut that ambitious people...
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Sentence: One may asserts that being ambitious is one of the negative character of mankind, but ,to some extend; it is hard to dispute or concur with this claim.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to may and asserts
Sentence: For example, in my friends view, I'm a very ambitious woman.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to friends and view
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Average Word Length: 4.645 4.6
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