Some people spend a lot of money for their wedding ceremonies. However, others feel like it is unnecessary to spend a lot. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion.
Weddings and the celebrations associated with them are fond remembrances for almost everyone. A faction of the society believes and continues to spend an exorbitant amount of such occasions. At the same time, there is another set of people who are against squandering money on lavish functions. Through this essay, I will explain the two sides of the same coin, and share why I regard that money should be spent as a right balance and not squabbled.
The cogent reason why people have a huge wedding is its significance. A massive life-event such as the culmination of marriage is a turning point in anyone's life. So much so, that people want to share their happiness and joy, celebrating with their kith and kin. With the advent of wedding planners, elaborate planning goes into ensuring that the event is in an exotic location. Furthermore, efforts are made to make everlasting memories not only for the wedding couple but also arrange expensive gifts for the guests invited to the wedding. For example, the recent wedding of the pop singer Nick Jonas was a 3-day long affair at a palace in India. News articles reported that the expense of the ceremonies was over one million dollars.
Contrastingly, many young people who have turned to Minimalism see all this spending as a waste of fund. The wedding is an equally important rung of their life ladder. However, they are cognizant of the fact that it is not wealth alone that makes happy memories. There is an increasing trend of people going to off-location weddings, inviting only the closest of their loved ones. For example, an article in the May 2020 Traveller magazine, has an exclusive section on wedding locations that are budget-friendly, at the same time, beautiful locales. Post which there has been a bump in travel bookings for the recommended places. The monies thus saved for a frugal wedding can later be utilized by the couple for their future, namely buying a house etc.
To sum it up, getting married is a huge decision and planning a wedding is an even bigger one. While both sides have their unique merits, the couple should jointly pick one, as this will have a remarkable impact on their life. I firmly reckon that choosing a simple marriage will leave them with more cash to make even more memories.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, thus, while, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1895.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83418367347 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61270199883 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576530612245 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.2315176873 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.2380952381 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7619047619 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174381874842 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489444995895 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0278099193865 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103541166946 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310845343185 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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