Many people believe that social networking sites (such a facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree?
Recently, the majority of society member speculate that social networking sites, taking facebook as an example, have adverse impact on personal and communities. However, I believe that there are more beneficial consequences of social networking to the individual but I agree that they have a damaging effect on communal life.
The positive impacts of social media for individual and communities that they have significant advantages which people are easy to communicate with their friends from distinctive countries for connecting each other. The reason for this is that facebook easy access for all people and convenient to communicate without visit the direct places. Besides, social media also provide social group that offers individual a chance to meet and participate in discussion with others who share common interest. For example, international student can interact with their friend from another country on facebook and participate in the video conferencing together which is provided by facebook. Consequently, this way could become an effective method to build a healthy relationship and avoid loneliness.
On the other hand, social media harms individual and local communities to easily find misleading information on social media because there is no legal path established by facebook. For instance, almost sixty percent people living in rural area which extremely difficult to operate network, believe the hoax news as they do not have an accurate information in terms of this news. Consequently, both individual and local communities would be easily to be provoked by the misleading information spreading in the social media.
To conclude, although social networking sites have made be easy for people to communicate, they have not the same effect for individuals and mainstream societies. Nevertheless, receiving a detrimental effect for them, they can be easily found misleading information on social media, especially facebook.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, however, if, nevertheless, so, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63945578231 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99988430523 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554421768707 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.3783955384 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 138.166666667 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256475294006 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104161339606 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610240309408 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179742735497 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586233817222 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.73 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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