The average annual expenditure on cell phone, national and international fixed-line services, 2001- 2010
The line graph illustrates the amount of money spent on cell phone national service an international fixed service from 2001 to 2010.
It is clear that while there was a sharp increase in average expenditure on cell phone service, levels of spending on international fixed-line service decrease over the period.
in 2001 the largest amount spent on national fixed-line service was about $700, while the figure for the international fixed-line service and cell phone service was lower, nearly $250 and $200 respectively. Over a period of 5 years starting from 2001, the average annual expenditure on national fixed-line service decrease about $200. In contrast, levels of spending on cell phone service rose significantly almost $300, consumers were used for international fixed-line service fluctuated nearly $300.
In 2006, the figure for national fixed-line and cell phone services was equal to about $500 respectively. From 2006 to 2010, consumers who allocated for cellphone reached nearly $750, while the amount of money using for international fixed-line service fluctuated approximately under $300.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 923.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49404761905 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01751665215 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470238095238 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 291.6 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2154735289 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.857142857 112.824112599 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 5.23603664747 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.577084943097 0.215688989381 268% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.344519172567 0.103423049105 333% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102679890738 0.0843802449381 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.418485724454 0.15604864568 268% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0932975116241 0.0819641961636 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.2329268293 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 61.2550243902 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 11.4140731707 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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