The given pie chart below shows the adult numeracy competencies in 24 different countries. -Syerapke- (rewrite)

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The given pie chart below shows the adult numeracy competencies in 24 different countries. -Syerapke- (rewrite)

Submitted by eddysuaib on Thu, 03/13/2014 - 20:24

The given pie chart below shows the adult numeracy competencies in 24 different countries.

Overal, the result of numeracy skill was different in each country. According to the data, we can classify them into 3 clusters; lower by 15 point, middle by 15-20, and the over by 2 point. Then, every condition in each group is interesting to see more.

Firstly, the lower groups contain with 8 countries, and dominated by countries from European continent. The motion of numeracy skills in this group is around 15 point to the low of trough point of whole measure.

Secondly, the middle cluster is more fascinating; Japan whom came from Asian continent achieved good numeracy skill for their folk parallel with other 8 developed countries in Europe. However this is a nice to see while Japan could be competing in the numeracy among developed country in the world.

Lastly, the result survey earn that the highest group with 6 countries have more variety with continents involved. It is United States from America, Ireland-Germany-UK-Spain from Europe, and Korea representative Asia. The topmost expert population in numeracy is attained by US by 2,7 point. Whereas Korea, achieve 2,2 point and also sign as the only Asian country which stand in the highest cluster.

In the nutshell, whereas based on quantity countries out of Europe are less, their inhabitants strongly enough in numeracy skill, indeed.

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Japan whom came from Asian continent
Japan who came from Asian continent

However this is a nice to see
However it is nice to see

the result survey earn that the highest group with 6 countries have more variety with continents involved.
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also sign as the only Asian country which stand in the highest cluster.
also signed as the only Asian country which stands in the highest cluster.

their inhabitants strongly enough in numeracy skill, indeed.
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the result survey earn that the highest group with 6 countries have more variety with continents involved.
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The survey results that country with highest point in different continents varied markedly while the United States of America reach the top notch numeracy skill by 27 point.