Some peole think young people are suitable for learning foreign languages some think adults are more suitable,Discuss both sides and give your opinion
Learning a language is an activity which is useful and takes considerable time. Some people opine that childhood stage is the best time to learn a language, while other believe that adults have more potential to gain new valuable skills, However, in my views, adults can become a quick and fast learner.
There is no doubt a young mind readily absorbs new information. This is because their cognitive skills develop at this age, while they have more ability to control over new language. For instance, 2-3 years, child imitate whatever they listen,Thus exposure of offspring to exotic language should be done in those formative years of life they are might able to grasp two language simultaneously simply listening others. What is more , children don't hesitate to ask whatever they don't understand.
On the other hand, opponents of view think that a person can become a better dialect in later years of life. Foremost reason is they are able to correlate their native terminology with a foreign terminology. In the way a new terms , concepts, and tenses they realize more quickly understood by comparing with that they already know. Moreover, youth have a strong motivation to memorize new language, the intention is that they have more chances to acquire their desire job when they are experts in more than one language, In this globalization era, employers prefer multilingual staff .Therefore, can approach a phraseology with mature and realistic expectations.
To conclude , I reiterate my opinion that grown-ups are more adaptive in nature .they have potential and opportunity to communicate with other nation's people through technology as related to minorty ones who lose their interest more easily .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, no doubt, in my view, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20727272727 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76923417306 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643636363636 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.7096157958 49.4020404114 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.181818182 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7272727273 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139234482383 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515818088772 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336182741399 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0885326158488 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391636700715 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.