Societies would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purpose, and can even be damaging. Do you agree or disagree?
While some advocate that a complete prohibition on all sorts of advertisements has positive effects on society because it is useless and even causes lots of damage. I totally disagree with this point of view.
There are several reasons for the whole prevention of all kinds of adverts that devastatingly suffer the community. The first reason is that the advertising industry creates a range of job opportunities for staffers. It is an avenue for people from different fields of specialization to work together to form a creative ad. This means millions of people have to face unemployment that severe impacts on their lives in case of promulgating a complete forbidding. The long-term jobless in the multimedia sections, for instance, embarks on a life of crime such as burglary, abduction, or drug dealing as a way to make a living. Another reason is that media corporations make significant financial contributions to the development of nations. These taxes are used by the government for the different programs and platforms created for the people. Hence, the government would lose a tremendous amount of tax revenue from commercial agencies leading to lacking budgets.
Additionally, advertisements bring a wide range of advantages to society without causing any harm. One of these benefits is to provide customers with information about products or services so that they can make better shopping choices. A good quality internet pop-up is likely to strongly impact on consumer behavior or branding awareness. To elaborate, by surfing the Web about different shampoo products, individuals decide the appropriate goods for personal demands. Furthermore, advertising plays a pivotal role in modern business through promotion and marketing campaigns. These enhance understanding about enterprises’ brand name to reach potential end-users, consequently, to boost their sales figures and increase profits.
In its entirety, I am a proponent of the idea that the community adverse effects caused by a total ban on advertising It was evidently seen that advertising is totally harmless for inhabitants and it brings various benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, if, so, while, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1814.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48036253776 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16966377821 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643504531722 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.421197479 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.705882353 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4705882353 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.82352941176 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145356745151 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0390245808397 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391684195298 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0891367130132 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409251613315 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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