Nowadays, pollution and waste levels are increasing rapidly. How does this affect ordinary people? What steps can be taken to overcome this problem?
In present scenario, it has been seen that contamination of environment through air and waste pollution become very popular and inclining at high rate. Hence, it is deteriorating the lives of common people. This essay will discuss the impact of such environment issues and provide some viable ways to combat it.
To start with, when environment is degrade through emission of air from vehicles and factories. Then, this leads to many health issues like asthma, heart attack etcetera. Moreover, disposable of waste from houses and factories to water bodies and grounds also impacts the body of humans adversely in terms of skin infections, respiratory and growth problems especially in children. Overall, these kinds of problems not only impair the quality of life but also reduce life expectancy.
Furthermore, there are some methods which can play a crucial role in improving the condition of our surrounding. Chief among of them is improving the essence of air by reducing the number of private vehicles on road. For example, Delhi government has enforced a law of odd and even number of vehicles which has played a role to control it to some extent. Besides this, there should be a proper management of waste such as it can be done by reducing, recycling and compositing it. Therefore, effective efforts by natives can improve the environment and ecosystem at large extent.
In conclusion, it does not how much people are anxious and concerned about environment, it will be worth full only when we come forward to combat it and make the world better place to live in for everyone like human, flora and fauna.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 36, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'degraded'.
Suggestion: degraded
.... To start with, when environment is degrade through emission of air from vehicles a...
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Line 7, column 32, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...tent. In conclusion, it does not how much people are anxious and concerned about ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03345724907 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70680476882 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624535315985 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5055965782 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.153846154 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159816445911 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465630571987 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050183346857 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0842504875001 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.011011540228 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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