Advantages and disadvantages for elderly retired people moving to another country.
Nowadays, numerous people tend to relocate to different countries after retiring from their jobs due to several reasons. The main reasons could be their personal choice or their children moving overseas for education or employment. In this essay, the benefits and drawbacks of senior citizens shifting abroad will be discussed.
To begin with, after working hard at a young age, elderly people could finally take advantage of their savings to live an extravagance life. At retirement age, most parents are free from the responsibility of paying utility bills and educational fees for their children because usually, they move to other countries to earn their livelihood and pay their remittance. Thus, after getting retired from work, old people could move to foreign countries and enjoy the rest of their lives. Moreover, relocating would be refreshing for those who spend their whole life in a single city. To exemplify, some aged Indians find exposure to western culture pleasant.
On the other hand, some people move to another country to stay close to their children, who work or study abroad. In such cases, it could become difficult for elders to adapt to a new place, especially if they have no friends or acquaintances in their neighborhood. Besides, since laws, rules, the language of foreign countries could be unfamiliar for senior citizens. Elder people staying in Paris, for example, if, would not understand or speak French, how would they survive there? Consequently, it would cause an inconvenience for people of old age.
To conclude, relocating to new places after retirement has both merits and demerits depending upon the motive, of an individual, to move. Whereas it could be advantageous for those who need a change in their surroundings and lifestyle, it might be disadvantageous if golden-agers would not be able to adapt to a new country's culture and traditions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, finally, if, moreover, so, thus, whereas, as for, for example, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22950819672 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82942271398 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593442622951 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4444211751 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.333333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341743055652 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11065501613 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594866436911 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209119841505 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507740969626 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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