In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read e-books rather than paper books. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
It is argued that nowadays, many individuals prefer reading online books compared to reading a hardbound book. This essay will argue that despite the fact that it causes strain on eyes, which can be taken care of with modern technology. I believe having accessibility to books everywhere is an advantage which outweighs any drawback.
On the one hand, viewing books for a longer duration on electronic devices leads to an eyesight problem, but it can be resolved with modern medical facilities. In other words, an eye has to work a little harder to read texts and images displayed on a computer, smartphones, and tablets compared to reading a printed book. Moreover, we tend to blink less when we are reading on a screen this causes eyes to become dry and sore. For example, as per an article by Queen Hopkins University, 70% of adults who have vision problems are because of long hours working on electronic devices. However, I believe technology has developed E-Ink, which would reduce strain impact on the eyes.
On the other hand, web-based books can be accessed from anywhere. Students and employees can download them and read them while sitting at home or while traveling, and they are also accessible in the absence of an internet connection. For instance, I have more than 500 books download on kindle tablets, and I read three books on an alternative basis while I am traveling and the best thing is I can read any one of them at any time and anywhere without carrying them physically. I believe the convenience of having them at your disposal at every time, without a need to carry along physically is an advantage.
In conclusion, viewing screen for a very long time affects our eyes being a downside, but modern technology can help to resolve it. In my opinion, the benefit of having easy access has overshadowed all disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 627, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ever, I believe technology has developed E-Ink, which would reduce strain impact ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, moreover, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87658227848 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73133899513 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575949367089 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.486803065 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.071428571 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.85714285714 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170815724733 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613954816849 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741464700759 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0996476002694 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068170641489 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.