It is often said “when in Rome, do as the Romans do”. Do you think people should adapt and accept the culture o f the country they visit? Do you think it is possible to learn a culture without learning its language?
It is widely believed that people should mix up with the culture of the place, where they are. In this essay, I shall refer to some examples to argue - contrary to the general opinion - that it should be the choice of an individual to either follow cultures of the country they are visiting or not and also discuss the importance of language in learning different cultures.
To begin with, the fundamental point to favor my opinion would be the diversity in cultures as well as different traditions followed in different parts of the world. In other words, the customs and beliefs of one religion/culture could be abhorrent to others. To exemplify, in India, cows are considered as a goddess and worshipped, on the other hand, in the US, people eat beef, which is impertinent and unacceptable for Hindu culture. Thus, it is incontrovertible that every culture could not be adapted and accepted by those who have completely opposite points of view.
With the increase in tourism, more population is traveling from one country to another. Also, due to advancements in technology, it has now become easier to understand and convey messages to others in different languages. For instance, google translator and other language translation applications are being commonly used by tourists while traveling to different places. Therefore, alleviating the significance of learning multiple languages to acquire knowledge about other cultures.
To conclude, freedom of choice should be given to travelers whether they prefer to habituate to the cultures of their destination or not. Furthermore, being multilingual is not a necessity to learn other cultures, since we can now simply use technology for translations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, as well as, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28205128205 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06937094802 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608058608059 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1841070763 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.166666667 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9166666667 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148281060691 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561944403548 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420380408451 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0974876671566 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496398059021 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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