Some people believe that for a hobby to be enjoyable it should be hard to acquire or learn. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Of course, the learning outcomes of the process of acquiring a tough hobby plays a paramount place in our lives. That is why, in recent years, there has been a growing body of opinion in favor of learning a difficult hobby, while I am in consummate discord with it because it usually not only requires a lot of hard work but also people might feel demotivated during this hard process.
Firstly, people need to work hard if they want to learn a difficult hobby. I do not think so it is easy in today's unprecedented times, where everyone already struggling hard to maintain an equilibrium between their personal and professional lives. A prime instance of this can be visible from rapidly increasing numbers of individuals suffering from psychological depressive disorders as they cannot even find time to look after their health. It would be wrong to have expectations from them to do hard work for acquiring not easy hobby.
Furthermore, a lack of motivation would be there if one asks to go for a hard hobby. If we feel demotivated due to the long and extreme process of obtaining a hard hobby, we might even afraid to start as it is human nature to desire for smooth life. What's worse, people tend to leave any tough task in between without completing it, which is even more displeasing. Statics have shown that people like to learn many easy hobbies over the course of their life instead of adopting one hobby that requires persistence.
As shown above, a decision in the favour of acquiring a tough hobby requires a consideration of persistence and encouragement one needs to have to commence it. Thus, I firmly opine that people should ignore it because of stress this struggle of learning a new difficult hobby can pose to one. It is recommended to adopt a simple and easy hobby to relieve daily life distress rather than to increase it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, so, thus, while, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76470588235 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71873871928 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551083591331 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4081014959 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.384615385 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8461538462 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277543561046 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0979663174264 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541948206471 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163394418612 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0214524974996 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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