Some people think that international news is more important than local news. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Whether international news should be deemed as superior importance compared to local ones or not have evolved as a heated contentious topic. Despite some arguments refuting the role of abroad news in favour of national ones, I am more convinced that overseas news can play a far- more vital role in people's lives.
To commence with, those who place a great emphasis on local news point to the need for understanding the social minutiae of a community from the social perspective. To put it differently, through broadcasting local news, public awareness will be raised about social norms in which citizens have to admit a whole range of set criteria. This means that mandatory social conventions and code of conduct enacted in the society will be announced to people by national news, thereby making people forced to move in the set frames. A good illustration of this is clearly delineated by Islamic countries where hijab is compulsory which it has been emphasising by the national announcement in succession. This in itself leads to civil awareness.
However, societal awareness could be categorized at a lower level in this respect. From an economic outlook, to colonized nations or countries suffering from imposed crippling sanction by dominant countries, global news tends to stand in a paramount place which firmly endorses the viewpoint of supporters of international news. In other words, if the economic vitality of a country undergoes an ill revolution, it is highly likely, economic news in the global level can lay the foundation to the country to take drastic action in order to combat its own economic ostracism, as we can see in Iran today. Since the global economic situation has a profound ripple effect of the level of subsistence of people residing in these countries, the rise in the awareness of international news will play a key role in taking a down-to-earth decision for their in the years ahead. Furthermore, environmental degradation has been recognized as a global pressing matter like global warming due to emissions which require a joint effort to overcome the difficulty and it is not in the monopoly of a country.
In conclusion, from the above reasons, while acknowledging the substantial role of national news in established conventions, I would embrace that international information is of much more particular importance owing to economic and environmental point of views.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, look, so, while, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 41.998997996 171% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2024.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 391.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17647058824 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05260082643 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554987212276 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 650.7 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.878677012 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.692307692 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0769230769 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237980282769 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813490332992 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658935483963 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160053507867 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680572148965 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 78.4519038076 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, look, so, while, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 41.998997996 171% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2024.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 391.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17647058824 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05260082643 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554987212276 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 650.7 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.878677012 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.692307692 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0769230769 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237980282769 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813490332992 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658935483963 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160053507867 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680572148965 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 78.4519038076 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.