Nowadays it is common for people to get married and have children in their thirties rather than when they are younger.
Do you agree or disagree that this trend will benefit society?
Whereas people used to marry and start a family at a young age earlier, in the modern era, this convention has changed. Indeed, to my mind, there is convincing evidence that getting married in adulthood has several advantages. In this essay, I shall refer to some sociological studies to support this view.
To begin with, a stable career and maturity are fundamental factors responsible for a peaceful and happy married life. This is because, unless an individual possess the adequate mental stability, it becomes difficult to handle human relationships because of the difference in opinions and misunderstandings. For example, recent research by Human Relations Institute shows that more than three-fourth cases of divorce are filed by the couples who got married at a young age and the main reason for these divorces is lack of understanding or extra-marital affairs. Thus, mature adults have a much less tendency for relationship failures.
Furthermore, people in their twenties are busy in developing a secure career, so they could not guarantee the proper fostering of their offspring when they are not self-sufficient. Needless to say, investment in children's education, well-being, and physical growth demand an astronomical amount of savings. However, at a young age, it could not be feasible. For instance, according to a study by Cambridge, on average, an individual completes his/her education at the age of 26 following which, after 5 to 6 years he/she would be able to get employed in a secure job. Therefore, for the economic growth of the nation and its population starting a family in thirties is quite beneficial.
To conclude, it is imperative to get well-settled and have a nonchalant mind before deciding to marry someone. Not only it will be advantageous to overcome the financial crisis after having a child, but also it would boost the harmony in personal relationships, thereby decreasing the chances of divorce.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, for example, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1638.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26688102894 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14887379364 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639871382637 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3765130572 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216080250999 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629750336865 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345280588474 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11518810756 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0132061130599 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.