Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well being of society and environment in which they operate Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations provided they operate within the law is to make as much mone

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...te or to make as much money as possible.Indisputably,corporations aim to make more money as ...
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...arity organisations for helping the poor,providing jobs for the unemployed and many more.T...
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...g jobs for the unemployed and many more.These kind of activities also promote the nam...
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...ame of the corporation in a good manner.By promoting the surrounding environments,...
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...y promoting the surrounding environments,corporations will be remembered as more efficient on...
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...able only to make more money.For example,consider the Motilal Corporation in Maharastra.T...
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...r the Motilal Corporation in Maharastra.This corporation only seems to make more mon...
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...ll being of its surrounding environment.Many famous businessmen criticize the corpor...
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...without even promoting its environments.This brings bad name to the corporation in a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, look, nevertheless, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, kind of, first of all, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2082.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 355.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.86478873239 5.05705443957 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.44682483809 2.79657885939 159% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 215.323595506 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.411267605634 0.4932671777 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 651.6 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.2370786517 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 88.0 23.0359550562 382% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 222.487499649 60.3974514979 368% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 520.5 118.986275619 437% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 88.75 23.4991977007 378% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 36.25 5.21951772744 695% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 35.0 7.80617977528 448% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.452676409923 0.243740707755 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.32465401074 0.0831039109588 391% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330543502372 0.0758088955206 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.32465401074 0.150359130593 216% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330543502372 0.0667264976115 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 50.5 14.1392134831 357% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -34.76 48.8420337079 -71% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 23.7 7.92365168539 299% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 40.0 12.1743820225 329% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.89 12.1639044944 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.34 8.38706741573 135% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 32.0 11.8971910112 269% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 37.2 11.2143820225 332% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 11.7820224719 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.

Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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