Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I agree that it's more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access rather than improving public transportation. Below are three reasons to support my claims.
First of all, I believe that governments have concerns about budgets, and they will spend less money on enhancing Internet access. For instance, two years ago, the Taiwanese government planned to replace household old internet-accessing devices with new ones. The whole projects cost ten million dollars, and everyone enjoys surfing the faster internet now. On the other hand, constructing public transportation such as MRT spends roughly ten billion dollars, which is hundreds of times of budget for refining Internet access.
Secondly, governments should place emphasis on the education of the next generation. To elaborate, with technology advance, more and more professors tend to prepare the teaching material through the Internet. Once the Internet speed is improved, accessing educational sources will be more efficient for professors. Also, when students learn by themself, they usually browse some websites, such as Wikipedia, for information. As a result, students can always absorb up-to-date knowledge because of the convenience of Internet access.
Last but not least, I would argue that governments exist for increasing the economic growth of the country. In addition, the Internet is a fundamental tool in every companies, bringing profits to them. For example, Google is a globalized enterprise, so the Internet is necessary for communication between departments located in different nations. Thus, with stable and high-speed Internet, businesses can function normally. On the contrary, poor internet connection might cause companies to lose the opportunity to transact with foreign companies. Evidently, in the long run, enhancing the Internet will make countries more competitive and profitable.
In sum, I firmly claim that governments should invest money in improving Internet access other than constructing public transportation system, as the government should consider factors such as how to manage its budget, how to improve education system, and how to increase economic growth. All these can be satisfied with improving Internet access, while I am not certain constructing transportation alone can do the same.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, first of all, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1987.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 346.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74277456647 4.8611393121 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06476828449 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606936416185 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4067096716 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.578947368 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2105263158 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78947368421 5.45110844103 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383841911138 0.236089414692 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109859059532 0.076458572812 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104542655912 0.0737576698707 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243000661203 0.150856017488 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125958292349 0.0645574589148 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 11.7677419355 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.01 10.9000537634 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.01818996416 118% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.