Some people believe that society should try to save every plant and animal species, despite the expense to humans in effort, time, and financial well-being. Others believe that society need not make extraordinary efforts, especially at a great cost in money and jobs, to save endangered species.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
The statement contends that the preservation of endangered animal or plant species at a great cost in money and jobs has little justification. I agree with this statement. In the last few decades man has only thought about financial gain and progress and has gone on to damage the wildlife ecosystem, causing many plant and animal species to become extinct, it is also the reason why some species population has been endangered.
Wherever possible steps should be taken to conserve these and encourage their growth. In fact, in many cases it helps promote tourism as people are interested in watching and knowing about endangered species. One of the examples which can be given are the efforts taken by the Australian government to preserve corals which are and endangered plants. They also serve as an excellent eco-tourism spot people from around the world visit Australia to see these reefs it provides a lot of business to the community there.
Another example of wildlife tourism is in the sunderbans forest in India where people come to see the Royal Bengal tiger suppose if the tigers were to become extinct then that would cause loss of tourism to that area.
if a particular species becomes extinct it also affects the whole food cycle, For example according to historical documents after the population of the Tasmanian tiger dropped sharply in indonesia the number of mice suddenly escalated and as a consequence, crop production decreased. In those years indonesia's agricultural exports nosedived causing loss to the country. Therefore, based on this example it seems fair to suggest that the protection of endangered animal or plants have a great impression on food cycles.
however, at the same time the government must strike a balance between wildlife conservation activities and the other development activities of people. it should not be the case that the needs of the people like jobs, food and other basic and rights are ignored in order to save the flora and fauna. it should be ensured that proper educational and health facilities are available to the people.
In conclusion i would like to state that even though at first thought people may not give enough importance to taking extraordinary efforts to keep endangered animal or plant species , others repudiate this idea because the protection of endangered species not only provides an impetus to tourism but also maintain the ecological cycle. however care should be taken that adequate resources are provided to health and education sectors
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- Some people believe that society should try to save every plant and animal species despite the expense to humans in effort time and financial well being Others believe that society need not make extraordinary efforts especially at a great cost in money an 66
- Some people believe that society should try to save every plant and animal species despite the expense to humans in effort time and financial well being Others believe that society need not make extraordinary efforts especially at a great cost in money an 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun plant seems to be countable; consider using: 'many plants'.
Suggestion: many plants
... damage the wildlife ecosystem, causing many plant and animal species to become extinct, i...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...species population has been endangered. Wherever possible steps should be taken ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...serve these and encourage their growth. In fact, in many cases it helps promote ...
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Suggestion: If
...use loss of tourism to that area. if a particular species becomes extinct it...
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Suggestion: However
... a great impression on food cycles. however, at the same time the government must s...
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Suggestion: It
...other development activities of people. it should not be the case that the needs o...
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Suggestion: It
...d in order to save the flora and fauna. it should be ensured that proper education...
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...lities are available to the people. In conclusion i would like to state that...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...le to the people. In conclusion i would like to state that even though at...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Suggestion: However
...but also maintain the ecological cycle. however care should be taken that adequate reso...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: however,
...but also maintain the ecological cycle. however care should be taken that adequate reso...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in fact, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2126.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 412.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16019417476 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7030989435 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553398058252 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 679.5 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.1682630212 60.3974514979 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.875 118.986275619 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 23.4991977007 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6875 5.21951772744 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219266637614 0.243740707755 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645847584472 0.0831039109588 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054299438259 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103708955952 0.150359130593 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059779569121 0.0667264976115 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 14.1392134831 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 100.480337079 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.