One who lives in a country and does not know the local language can cause serious social and practical problems. In my opinion, I agree with that idea because nobody will feel comfortable with themselves, their friends and their job. The following lines will explain the reasons for this approach.
Talking about oneself, if one does not speak the local language of the country he lives, he will feel terrible. Therefore, this person will prefer to be isolated at home and talk with people who speak his language or he will prefer to see films that can be understood on the Internet. Turning on the TV or the radio would be pointless since one will not be able to analyze and understand its content.
On the other hand, in the relationship with friends, the person may be victim of “bullying” because he or she cannot speak correctly, express ideas clearly or misunderstand what they try to say. That situation can affect the social relations and produce mental problems.
And, regarding the job, people can make mistakes in the assignments what they were hired for or they won’t be able to make a speech in a formal way since they are not capable of speaking the foreign language. For this reason, people, for example, will stay only for a short period of time in the company as his/her boss won’t trust him/her. Finally, the lack of ability with the native language can cause serious problems in your job because you won’t be able to express your ideas to your boss, colleagues or during formal speeches or essays.
In conclusion, although people should think that it is normal to go to live abroad, in a country which one has to speak a foreign language, it is important to consider the mental problems which cause when you make mistakes while trying to understand a non-native language. Besides, people should remember that it is difficult to make friends. Not all of them will give a hand with the language.
One who lives in a country and does not know the local language can cause serious social and practical problems. In my opinion, I agree with that idea because nobody will feel comfortable with themselves, their friends and their job. The following lines will explain the reasons for this approach.
Talking about oneself, if one does not speak the local language of the country he lives, he will feel terrible. Therefore, this person will prefer to be isolated at home and talk with people who speak his language or he will prefer to see films that can be understood on the Internet. Turning on the TV or the radio would be pointless since one will not be able to analyze and understand its content.
On the other hand, in the relationship with friends, the person may be victim of “bullying” because he or she cannot speak correctly, express ideas clearly or misunderstand what they try to say. That situation can affect the social relations and produce mental problems.
And, regarding the job, people can make mistakes in the assignments what they were hired for or they won’t be able to make a speech in a formal way since they are not capable of speaking the foreign language. For this reason, people, for example, will stay only for a short period of time in the company as his/her boss won’t trust him/her. Finally, the lack of ability with the native language can cause serious problems in your job because you won’t be able to express your ideas to your boss, colleagues or during formal speeches or essays.
In conclusion, although people should think that it is normal to go to live abroad, in a country which one has to speak a foreign language, it is important to consider the mental problems which cause when you make mistakes while trying to understand a non-native language. Besides, people should remember that it is difficult to make friends. Not all of them will give a hand with the language.
- The table below shows the estimated oil capacity of six countries in millions of barrels per day from 1990 to 2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- The chart below shows the value of one country s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016 The table shows the percentage change in each category or exports in 2016 compared with 2015 78
- The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 56
- Some people believe that technology has made man more social To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 89
- The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 133, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a formal way" with adverb for "formal"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... or they won’t be able to make a speech in a formal way since they are not capable of speaking ...
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Line 4, column 275, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...for example, will stay only for a short period of time in the company as his/her boss won’t tr...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, talking about, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 1.00243902439 1796% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 5.60731707317 678% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 965.302439024 165% => OK
No of words: 335.0 196.424390244 171% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75820895522 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 3.73543355544 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51103867254 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 106.607317073 162% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516417910448 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.0 283.868780488 168% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.4749267548 43.030603864 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.857142857 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9285714286 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1428571429 5.23603664747 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.13902439024 615% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.426647477389 0.215688989381 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150659482478 0.103423049105 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.156556378509 0.0843802449381 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266870698579 0.15604864568 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.274738233507 0.0819641961636 335% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 40.7170731707 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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