The table below gives data on the hour of leisure time per year for people in Someland.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the table below.
The data shows how people who have different ages spend their leisure time in Someland during a year. Overall, the amount of leisure time varies notoriously in the seven groups of ages for the six activities presented for their free time.
According to the table, teens and 70s are the group of people who dedicate more hours watching tv/videos in comparison to the people located into the 20s to 60s. It is the same with the individual exercise (both age with 150 hours). In the other hand, cinema is the least activity that all of the ages consider less hours of leisure.
Talking about exercises and sport, it is seen that people in 60s and 70s do not use hours of their leisure time. But, in the other side, teens dedicate 450 hours for that activity. And, if someone compares this case during all the period of time of the life, it is noticed that while you are growing up, you decide to do less exercise and reduce your time to practice a sport.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 285, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...hand, cinema is the least activity that all of the ages consider less hours of leisure. ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 310, Rule ID: LESS_DOLLARSMINUTESHOURS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer hours'?
Suggestion: fewer hours
... activity that all of the ages consider less hours of leisure. Talking about exercises...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 310, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun hours is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... activity that all of the ages consider less hours of leisure. Talking about exe...
^^^^
Line 5, column 232, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...meone compares this case during all the period of time of the life, it is noticed that while y...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 784.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50574712644 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15096140328 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574712643678 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6082924427 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20292803636 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898252423217 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062639566417 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140647080604 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718028380744 0.0819641961636 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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