Your friend is planning to start an import export business and is seeking your recommendation on a product. Write a letter to him, explain
1. What product you recommend
2. Why you recommend that product
3. How it could benefit his/her business
Dear Naina,
I hope you and your family are doing great. As you have written to me a few days ago asking for some advice on your new business, one product came into my mind that i think would be the best option to start with.
Well, selling organic dry fruits seems to be a great idea in current days. As you know, people nowadays are more conscious about their health, and they always look for more natural products than the commodities produced using chemicals and pesticides. I am recommending this product to you because of two reasons. First, i observed that there is not a single vendor or businessman in your area, who are dealing in this business. So if you start a local shop for organic dry fruits, people would jump on it immediately, and your business would thrive. Secondly, I know one dealer who has connections with several farmers, who grow organic crops and produce organic dry fruits. They just need help taking these products to the market. I will surely connect you with them.
Furthermore, considering all the mention factors, this business would thrive drastically.
Let me know if you have any other queries or doubt about this. We will meet and discuss it personally.
Best wishes.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2020-08-12 | nainsi1991@gmail.com | 89 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 166, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ess, one product came into my mind that i think would be the best option to start...
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Line 5, column 322, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...t to you because of two reasons. First, i observed that there is not a single ven...
^
Line 5, column 697, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to take' or 'take'.
Suggestion: to take; take
...organic dry fruits. They just need help taking these products to the market. I will su...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, i think, you know, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1014.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80568720379 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46969912333 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672985781991 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4236228055 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2307692308 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 4.34317383033 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224899207114 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720044523269 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069342680267 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113227046479 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706634239314 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.