The table and pie charts give information about Ashdown Museum before and after its refurbishment in terms of visitor number and degree of satisfaction.
There are two figures, one is the table depicting total number of people visited to the Ashdown museum and other is pie chart describing results of surveys of visitors satisfaction before and after refurbishment of Ashdown museum.
Overall, the maximum people visited to the museum after its repairment than before. Besides this, major proportionof people were very satisfied after its refurbishment, while before its development, the most of the vistors were dissastisfied with museum.
After refurbishment, 92 thousand people visited to the museum in which 40% people were satisfied with its construction, had contributed the largest portion of the figure, 35% were very satisfied and very few people were seen dissatisfied. Similarly, before refurbishment, 30% visitors were satisfied and majority of visitors were dissatisfied.
On comparing, there was one tenth increase in number of visitors after refurbishment. However, the ratio of satisfied people was declined from 40% to 15% throughout the period. Also, no major fluctuation could be seen in ratio of very dissatisfied people over the period .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, similarly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 942.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60714285714 4.92477711251 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12285919809 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535714285714 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.4079321881 43.030603864 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.75 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254459878128 0.215688989381 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126919499266 0.103423049105 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129387389766 0.0843802449381 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190738301212 0.15604864568 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.148038036345 0.0819641961636 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 61.2550243902 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 11.4140731707 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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