Write a letter to friend to inform them of a celebration you are having for a recent job promotion. Include information about
- The promotion
- The celebration
- Their accomodation
Dear Peter,
How are you? I hope you and your family is fine in this uncertain time. It has been ages since we went out together.
Actually, I am writing because I have great news for you. Do you remember, I have told you my job was incredibly stressful and challenging lately due to a project I was in charge of?
Anyway, it paid off as my team successfully completed it, and as a result, I was promoted. I have received the position of the head of the Almaty city branch of our company.
Thus, I decided to celebrate my promotion and gather all my close friends together because without your support it would not possible to accomplish it. The celebrating party will be at my summerhouse in California on the next weekend. I would like to invite you and your wife to join the party and stay at my house for the whole weekend. You will stay in a separate bedroom on the second floor with a stunning view of the ocean. Frankly speaking, I have made a renovation in the house and I wish you to see a new design and decoration.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. I hope you will be able to come and spend time with me.
Take care,
Maria
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: CONFUSION_OF_OUR_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'our'?
Suggestion: our
...in time. It has been ages since we went out together. Actually, I am writing beca...
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Line 8, column 537, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...you to see a new design and decoration. I am looking forward to hearing from you...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, anyway, frankly, if, look, second, so, thus, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 949.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33333333333 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49100046103 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611872146119 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4923465928 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.2666666667 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18150876622 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053440737143 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440166462117 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0852503675646 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556219904296 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.24 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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