Some people think it is the better for people to change the career at least once in the life and do different kind of jobs. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In this current era, due to technology improvement and drastic changes in the employment opportunities we need to diversify our career path for better success. Hence, I do agree with this statement that diversification can be a good option nowadays to achieve our desire lifestyle.
According to statistics, we can obtained that individual person have enough potential for several field of carrier whereas, they could be too well perform rather than their routine monotonous life. By this diversification, we can expand the vision to see the world at another level and by obtaining it we can reach out to our desire life by upgrading our skills based on the opportunity and own potential.
Moreover, due to speedy changes in professional careers, to sustain and to be continue with our financial resources we have to go with multiple opportunities and challenges. It has several benefits by doing this as we can analyse our market value, our potential and many other potential skills as well. By this also we can able to make better version of ourselves by upgrading or by learning a new skill.
To recapitulate, by taking such decisions in career path we can be expand our potential and keep learning and upgrading ourselves for better career aspects in coming days. Eventually, it is a better version of ownselves and we can live our life in productive way whereas, we can live with peace and happiness.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 33, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'obtain'
Suggestion: obtain
...yle. According to statistics, we can obtained that individual person have enough pote...
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Line 3, column 91, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun field seems to be countable; consider using: 'several fields'.
Suggestion: several fields
...vidual person have enough potential for several field of carrier whereas, they could be too w...
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Line 3, column 289, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to see the world at another level and by obtaining it we can reach out to our des...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, moreover, so, well, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1181.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00423728814 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96468186356 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555084745763 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.8197838222 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.222222222 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2222222222 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149775416405 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780320121734 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317095922473 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112488396591 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464845302658 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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