In the future it will become more difficult to live on Earth so more money should be spent researching how to live on other planets such as Mars.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Man has over the years sort measures to dominate its current ecosystem and continuously seek ways to transcend beyond controlling its environment into other untapped planets hence the recent speculations of rising unease residing on planet earth. As a result of which, resources are expended into studying life in other planets. My personal opinion is that it took a long time for humans to dominate its current planet and as such all resources being diverted is needed to make our environment more livable.
Our quest for superiority in the food chain hopefully will not cause us harm from the weakest of organisms. More studies should be done about our environment because we yet to master living in it. In view of that, those funds should be spent investigating climate change and leading campaigns that enlightens fellow residents of our vulnerabilities and mistakes. Billions of dollars as we know are used up to fund researches about other planets and space travels which in my opinion might end up wasted because if were successful in destroying planet earth, the probability that we will harm the next planet is inevitable. Such misdeeds ranges from deforestation, burning of fossil, gas flaring and several other ways we directly or indirectly introduce new toxins or poisonous materials to our environment.
Furthermore, life as we know started on earth and leaving the familiar to the unfamiliar for most individuals is an actual task. How may persons are prepared for a mass migration with anti-gravity suits, canisters of oxygen in giant rocket ships? In a survey carried out in 2016 by the space agency of India, 85.7% of people are worried about the future on earth but are not looking forward to life on other planets.
Whilst I agree that there a need to make earth more livable for the future generation, resources allotted for development of our ecosystem should not be utilized for the purpose of creating false utopia.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 333, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...into studying life in other planets. My personal opinion is that it took a long time for humans ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 638, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'range'.
Suggestion: range
...ext planet is inevitable. Such misdeeds ranges from deforestation, burning of fossil, ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, look, may, so, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05900621118 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79247122254 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605590062112 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.6453926415 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.75 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8333333333 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221238048182 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736817270345 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471461907544 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123366683632 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399357566458 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 333, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...into studying life in other planets. My personal opinion is that it took a long time for humans ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 638, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'range'.
Suggestion: range
...ext planet is inevitable. Such misdeeds ranges from deforestation, burning of fossil, ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, look, may, so, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05900621118 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79247122254 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605590062112 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.6453926415 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.75 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8333333333 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221238048182 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736817270345 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471461907544 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123366683632 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399357566458 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.