Some people believe that increasing violence in the media is the cause of increasing violence in our society, especially among children. Others believe that children's peer groups and parental role models are a much more powerful influence on children's behavior.
Violence in the media is increasing day by day.This is the cause of increasing violence in our society especially among children. This is believed by some people and even I believe it. On the other hand, Other people believe that children's peer groups and parental role models are a much more powerful influence on children's behaviour. Even this is true at some extant but they ignored the root cause of majority cases. I totally agree with first statement. The reasons mentioned further.
First of all, Violence in the media is increasing day by day which is the fact. No one can deny it. The effect of media on human brain is too high. Even many surveys and reports shows that every person including children spend theri majority of time watching media compare to other activities. For example, Mostly children watches cartoons, Today every cartoon contains scene which is related to violence but it is just they show it in different way. They shows it in funny way but subconciously these scenes affect children's mind. We know some of the famous cartoon like Doremon, Ninja Hathori. If you will observe in these cartoon their are always on character who has great strength and on who is too much weak and eventually weak one always beaten by strengther one. Nobita and Jian from Doremon are also this kind of example. Apparently it seems just funny and pleasant to eye. But Here is the twist, It eventually left the mark on child's mind that powerful one is always beat the weaker one.
In addition, We can see that in today's cinema there is huge trend of action movies. Even in romantic movies there are many scenes which contains viloence. No matter which type of movies person like at some extant it will contain violence scene. For example, In action movies there is definetly violence roles, In which one person looks cool and do fight and all things. Eventually he would be lead actor of this movies so obvious it will effect at great extant on viewers mind. At the same time take an example of Romantic movies, even in these kind of movies, Lead Actor fights with villains and save the Lead acteress and She fall in love with him. These kind of scene we can see in these movies. Which will subconsciously left mark that Hero will always dp fight and he looks cool etcetra.
Further, Contradictory side which is explained by second statement. It is also some how effect of first statement. Peer of children or even every person are performing violence behaviou whichh will greatly influnce children's mind. But these violence is also come from media. The scond Statement is just another path to reach more people. Though parental violence is different cause and it is totally correct that it is not influnce by media but it is due to another personal reasons in most of the cases.
In conclusion, I would say that media has agreater power to influnce people then any other medium. Media is the source of violence in majority of the cases in todays world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, if, look, second, so, then, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2457.0 2235.4752809 110% => OK
No of words: 519.0 442.535393258 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73410404624 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7730044521 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34874205933 2.79657885939 84% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 215.323595506 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.452793834297 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 767.7 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 20.2370786517 163% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.9367527684 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4545454545 118.986275619 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7272727273 23.4991977007 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21212121212 5.21951772744 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 5.13820224719 272% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349911426618 0.243740707755 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793025250169 0.0831039109588 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124117807913 0.0758088955206 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234099287177 0.150359130593 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.213071648721 0.0667264976115 319% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 14.1392134831 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 48.8420337079 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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