You stayed at a hotel last week. After you got home, you realized that you had left your watch behind. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter,
- Explain what happened to your watch
- Describe your watch
- Ask the manager to help you find it
Dear Sir/Madam,
I write to notify you about my watch which I forgot at your hotel when I was lodged in as a guest last week.
For more clarity, I will explain the circumstance under which I dashed out of the hotel without remembering to pick up my watch. Be reminded of an incident on Tuesday last week when one of waiters at the brunch stand tripped on a guests’ luggage spilling the content on her tray on another guest. I happen to be the guest drenched by coffee and fruit juice. After the accident, I quickly removed my wrist watch to avoid fluid touching the surface and did not remember to pick it up because I was in a hurry to catch up a scheduled flight.
For the purpose of description, it is an apple watch, series 5, 32 mm screen with a few scratches. It has a blue strap with distinctive silver buckles that sparkles under light.
I kindly appeal that you assist me find the watch because it was a gift from a dear friend and it hold really dear memories. I can make my address available for shipping on your confirmation and the cost will be bore by me.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Thank you.
Yours faithfully,
Theresa Max
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 99, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'holds'?
Suggestion: holds
...it was a gift from a dear friend and it hold really dear memories. I can make my add...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 965.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48837209302 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48301531654 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632558139535 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5283093713 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7272727273 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5454545455 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.45454545455 4.34317383033 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286051552936 0.216113520407 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106626857618 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0905263051608 0.0603063233224 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154530737743 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105734394291 0.0580467560999 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 99, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'holds'?
Suggestion: holds
...it was a gift from a dear friend and it hold really dear memories. I can make my add...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 965.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48837209302 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48301531654 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632558139535 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5283093713 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7272727273 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5454545455 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.45454545455 4.34317383033 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286051552936 0.216113520407 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106626857618 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0905263051608 0.0603063233224 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154530737743 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105734394291 0.0580467560999 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.