On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything you lost.
Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter
Describe the item you lost
Explain how are you last it
Tell the insurance company what you would like them to do.
Dear sir/madam
I am waiting to inform you that I recently lost my digital camera while on my holiday city of Ontario,Canada.
The camera is a black Canon 70 D and cost 78,000 INR when I bought It new last month. It has a resolution of 20 megapixel, a Canon 67 mm lens and was in a brown leather case with my name on it.
I lost it when I was having coffee with my husband in the bank paper area of Ontario city. I believe that the coffee shop was called Highlands coffee and it was in your Niagara waterfall. We had been at the coffee shop for around 45 minutes when I noticed it was missing.
I am entitled to make a claim for the value of the above mentioned item and request that you send me details on what I need to do in order to proceed.
I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
Yours faithfully.
Nidhi Mehta.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 102, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Canada
...mera while on my holiday city of Ontario,Canada. The camera is a black Canon 70 D and ...
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Line 5, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...I noticed it was missing. I am entitled to make a claim for the value of the abo...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 689.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.17575757576 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47652708638 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624242424242 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.163090263 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.125 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.875 4.34317383033 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190540480242 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696587590523 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632725620185 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108092674509 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064176716051 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.96 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.