LETTER OF INSTRUCTION
YOU HAVE JUST SPENT A WEEK WITH A FREIND ON HOLIDAY. WHEN YOU GOT HOME YOU REALISED YOU HAD LEFT YOUR WALLET THERE. WRITE A LETTER TO YOUR FREIND .IN YOUR LETTER :
• THANK YOUR FREIND FOR THE HOLIDAY
• EXPLAIN THAT YOU LEFT YOUR WALLET IN THEIR HOUSE
• GIVE THEM INSTRUCTIONS OF HOWTO SEND IT BACK TO YOU
Dear Elena
How are you? I’ve just arrived safely in Kuala Lumpur, and find myself already missing your company. Thank you for giving me the best holiday ever at your place in Penang. You also pampered me so thoroughly while I was there that I’m completely rejuvenated and refreshed after the holiday.
When I got back, I realised that I left my wallet in your house. I think my wallet is sitting on the dressing table of the bedroom I was using. I remember placing it there before starting to pack, and when the taxi came earlier than expected, I must have forgotten to put it back in my bag .
When you find my wallet, could you please pass it to Arthur who is in Penang this weekend before he returns to Kuala Lumpur on Monday? I would really appreciate it if you could pop around to the Shangrila Hotel to pass my wallet to him anytime on Saturday or Sunday. This would be the quickest and safest way of getting the wallet back to me.
I’m so sorry for being such a scatterbrain and inconveniencing you. I promise to make it up to you by buying you lunch the next time we meet, hopefully soon.
Love,
Chris
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 290, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... have forgotten to put it back in my bag . When you find my wallet, could you p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 923.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4375 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37362050705 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649038461538 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8970724929 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.9166666667 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357164251204 0.216113520407 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120848092842 0.0766984524023 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852440632372 0.0603063233224 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201260525724 0.12726935374 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643674838375 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.