On balance, advertising is more harmful than beneficial. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
I disagree that advertising is more harmful than beneficial. People usually find advertisements annoying and useless. Social media tracks its users' information. Then it sells users' profiles for big organizations. This would help them a lot in bringing advertisements to a wide range of audiences. But if we look at the bright side of this, those advertisements may meet our demand. We do not have to waste so much time on finding a suitable product. Advertisements also have a great influence on your decision of buying something. When ads are provided for you, it attracts you by identifying your interest such as your idol or hobbies. What if the product you are looking for is endorsed by a celebrity you admire the most? In my opinion, this method of advertising is beneficial to you, because you do not only make the right choice of shopping but also support your idol. People call this "cheap moment with idol". This may lead to a positive result. You would use the product longer as the result of the product appearing with the celebrity you like. So the product has made such a strong impression on you. Advertisements also inspire you. Once I watched the ad of Samsung, I felt in love with this brand immediately. The song in this ad is motivational and so compatible with the image of the phone. This song was performed by Blackpink, which is my favorite girl group. Besides invading our private information, advertising is not so black as it is painted. In my opinion, advertising is more beneficial than harmful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, look, may, so, then, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83650190114 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9980789678 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585551330798 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.0675035097 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.5714285714 106.682146367 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.5238095238 20.7667163134 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.19047619048 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264522366153 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836205266469 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108115657118 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.264522366153 0.151304729494 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 13.0946893788 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.9 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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