Many people nowadays are worried about the quality of the food they buy. What are some of these problems? Can the problem be reduced by governments or individuals?
In the contemporary state of our society, the quality of the food that people purchase has been an issue of concern, as it negatively affects the health of those consumers, leading to severe health issues such as obesity, food poisoning, or cancers. This essay will delve into some of these problems, along with feasible solutions.
There is a variety of problems that the unguaranteed quality of food has created, causing people’s concern about the food they buy. The first problem to be mentioned is the increasing use of processed and fast food. Since these products are undoubtedly low in nutrients and high in the amount of salt, sugar, trans fat, and calories, they are notorious for their contribution to diabetes, obesity, and cardiovascular diseases. Another problem leading to people’s worries is the use of prohibited chemicals in food, as some merchants are not hesitated to use them to capitalize on the profit. For example, in Vietnam, there are lots of small traders who soaked their fruits in carcinogens before selling to beautify the appearances of the fruits, causing people’s concern about food quality.
Fortunately, there are some possible solutions to tackle these problems. The government’s regulatory roles should be demonstrated in raising people’s awareness through subsidy educational campaigns or to impose higher taxes on processed and fast food businesses, as it would disincentivize people to consume these products. Moreover, policies should be implemented to punish and deter those who sold contaminated food with high fines and even imprisonment. As individuals, knowledge enrichment is required to have the right food choice, which is safe and healthy to consume while also avoid risking to damage our health by eating unguaranteed food.
In conclusion, poor food quality is posing a threat to people’s health, but efforts could be made to mitigate the consequences. If the authority takes their shot, along with individuals’ involvement, hopefully, people will not suffer from the problems arising from poor food quality in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1768.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42331288344 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99577531332 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576687116564 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.4128339631 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.0 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0769230769 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357900012147 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126012427754 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820357131173 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198888099507 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0762258449902 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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