People now have the freedom to work and live anywhere in the world due to the development of communication technology and transportation.
Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
In the current scenario, owing to latest technology in communication and transportation, it is possible to work and live anywhere irrespective of geographical borders. Although people have different opinions about its advantages and disadvantages, I believe it can bring more benefits compared to demerits if any.
On the one hand, working freedom across the globe has several positives. Firstly, productivity of people has increased since the development in commuting. Employees can save their time due to faster and more comfortable transportation facilities and invest the same time in their work. For an example, some of IT professionals travel abroad to solve problems of clients and come back to home country within couple of days. Secondly, adaptability is better compared to past because of contemporary communication technology. Working professionals and immigrants can easily learn about foreign languages and culture. Due to this, they may not feel culture shock and help them to adjust in foreign society.
On the other hand, despite benefits discussed above, the disadvantages of working and living anywhere should not be neglected. Detrimental effect on the health is prime demerit. To be more specific, in past few years, the numbers of people working in professional field have increased which has made their life hectic. This has deteriorated their health by increasing mental and physical stress. Moreover, in some cases local people get less career opportunities because of foreign workers are ready to work at low wages. However, both negatives are manageable by taking appropriate measures.
In conclusion, while the trend of working and living across the globe, due to latest technological development in transportation and communication, has both positive and negative effects, I believe the advantages of this trend outweigh any controllable disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 32, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the latest'.
Suggestion: to the latest
In the current scenario, owing to latest technology in communication and transpo...
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Line 7, column 76, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the latest'.
Suggestion: to the latest
...orking and living across the globe, due to latest technological development in transporta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63859649123 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22760484823 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60701754386 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.3585581108 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.4375 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8125 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327902712767 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081796350381 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704042767802 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191764879717 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508467668121 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.