International tourism has brought enormous benefits to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?
There is no gainsaying the fact is that international tourism has become popular. It is believed that tourism puts numbers of upside impacts to many places. At the same time it has some effects on local residents and environment. I think that positive side of this trend outweighs negative side which i will discuss in upcoming paragraphs.
On the one hand, the is some demerits of tourism. First and formost is that it May creates crime. To illustrate, when large numbers of tourists visit on a place. Due to this, the place become overcrowded. Hence, it will lead the problem of dangerous situation ( such as rob, cheat and so on). Moreover, sometimes the garbage is thrown by tourists (like plastic bottles) at everywhere will spoil the environment.
On the other hand, tourism industry has many merits. First of all, job opportunities. To be more precise it, when a international company is establish in a country that will provide many job opportunities to people. By doing job in that companies Especially poor people will earn salary and fulfill their basic neends. To add it, individuals can get chance to meet with people who are from other nations and also they can learn about different culture and language. Secondly, economic growth. To elaborate it, when tourists travel to other country they have to spend money for it. So, it will helps to uplift the economy rate of country.
To conclude, having mulled over the aforementioned information it is clear that although, tourism industry puts negative effects on people and environment but the positive effects of this situation can not be neglected.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, i think, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01115241636 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77180365148 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594795539033 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.3086674518 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.9473684211 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1578947368 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05263157895 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229495337498 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615975169811 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058946857718 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129050741058 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760219278102 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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